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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
If I could feel your touch Warm fingertips upon my cheek, Instead of bitter cold wind Frosting every word I speak, If I could watch your eyes As you talk of loving warm, But I squeeze tight my lids As roof top wind makes snow swarm. The night of snow ended yet blows Drifting closed streets after the plow; I put back my shovel by the door And leave it blown smooth for now. Gloom |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Wow, very expressive... ~ARh  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, A Romantic Heart, Pleased you enjoyed Gloom |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I did enjoy it alot Professor and I could enjoy it more  ... maybe I could come to your class and take lessons from you? ~Love and Hugs ~ARH We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*cough* loved it Gloomy one!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very lovely expressions of love Soft and warm Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, It always helps to take a rest. Enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"If I could feel your touch Warm fingertips upon my cheek," It's there in words for you to feel to know the touch, the warmth is real. Into the wind the wanting knows upon your cheek, your lips expose a planted kiss in staying wait in full moon rise the day's create silly thoughts imagined clear to decompose the shadow's fear. It's I, you know, the one who cares loving you in words, declare. A simple rhyme, in symbol thought a lessening of empty sought. Would I, if I only could unmask the real, if understood~~ you inspired this day... M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write Gloom |
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