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Snow
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0 posted 2005-02-25 02:09 AM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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1 posted 2005-02-25 02:11 AM


absolutely stunning!
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2 posted 2005-02-25 02:39 AM


"escape with me into the rain"
soooo beautiful!!

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3 posted 2005-02-25 06:26 AM


Dark passion...mmmm..i like it...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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4 posted 2005-02-25 09:03 AM


Jesus, this is just OUT there BAM!
I love it, Snow.

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5 posted 2005-02-25 09:32 AM


Beautiful, Snow

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6 posted 2005-02-25 10:34 AM


Beautiful presentation, Snow. This not only takes time to imagine such a showcase, but talent as well, and you possess both.
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7 posted 2005-02-26 07:53 PM


Snow,
  This piece is totally awsome.
I like this one.

:-)

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8 posted 2005-02-28 09:31 AM


The words alone are stunning yet you managed to make it even more electrifying by the placement of the words on the picture...

outstanding work.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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9 posted 2005-02-28 10:19 AM




I have no words left, you've drained me of all inspiration...and that's a good thing

Feeling exceptional nostalgic today, and this woven by a woman of much passion, expresses what a lot of us have known and know....

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10 posted 2005-02-28 10:27 AM


wow..beautifully done
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Snow
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11 posted 2005-02-28 10:37 AM




thank you ALL so much for the comments on this one.

Re: the email ... LMAO!!! yes that's me. No, i won't post one without the art. :-)~  the focus were the lips & the words. *smirk*

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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12 posted 2005-03-01 02:28 AM


excellence with beauty~


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13 posted 2005-03-01 11:56 AM


now how did I friggin miss this?  Absolutely perfect Snow.  HUGS
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14 posted 2005-03-01 01:13 PM


Yep.  This is a WOW!

JL


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15 posted 2005-03-01 06:22 PM


Enticing...and then some...James
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16 posted 2005-06-17 09:10 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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