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Electra
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Electra |
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urdarbrunn Junior Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 10 |
Looking through the rear view mirror, I wonder. What if I had taken off the mask, Exposing the glow of infatuation What would have happened if I had made the first move? Crossing the line that you could not. Images of Lust Burning Passion Satisfaction Fantasies A less turbulent, predictable path was taken I kept the illusion of oblivion Afraid of consequence. I sit here without regret I am left with daydreams. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Daydreams can come in quite handy at times! Fantasies can stir the imagination and warm you on cold nights!  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The perspective you bring is a hard line. Well written, but a little vague. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never know until you try |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Photoimagery of cabdrivers... very good. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love to day dream.  And I really, really enjoyed this write!  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
it is dangerous that you title this electra, while speaking of moves not made. remember, she was the daughter of agamemnon who LOVED her father. perhaps you meant none of that, but your title recalls it. -majnu |
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