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Slow Slide
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Slow Slide |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Lingering in liquid pools, I stare into soul windows and heart places are touched {becoming lost} I feel myself s l i p p i n g away beginning this slow slide into you. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
ooooh...yes...this is very hot! Loved this spirit! love your poems lately! ~ARh We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GS..the slow slide can be so naughty but so nice enjoyed your touch here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and those are the places every writers words take us to... Bravo!!! This took me away and to your place for a moment...wonderful writing |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
omgoodness, what a way to wake up .... *s* what i love about this is the subtle way you lead the mind (which is my favorite kind of writing) ... and yet, this really does seem to have a dual tone to it. (again, my favorite) :-) nice job hon. "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It sounds like someone is very lucky! Intriguing story. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Excellent write Donna! Thanks for my first morning sigh. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just the warmth my morning needed! *S* Beautiful work! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
...So SO nice... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yum...James |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
mmmmm! Rf |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very, very niiice Donna -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Perfect!! JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks all! |
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