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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I remember the other side down under the limbs there where the view of the ocean was like tiptoes in the creek behind a misty mountain's indigo being there with you we would just forget the names we had for ourselves and just do what lovers do when the agenda is torn up and stuffed into a knot hole like secret whispered dreams a child would leave behind with their upside down innocent _____ Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
when the agenda is torn up and stuffed into a knot hole like secret whispered dreams a child would leave behind with their upside down innocent _____ dontcha just love when you get to deviate from the agenda??  Loved this soft heart smile. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and there, then, we were somehow holy, as it were it seemed, peace, tranquility, no sorrow, no worries, no clothes, we ran naked before the mind, and never blinked an eye...sound was so much more distinct, colors were brilliant, music unimaginable...and us...our thoughts were pure...with no thoughts for ourselves, but for the others there...we saw, then, only our hearts...light and airy Wonderful music penned by you...enjoyed you here, in this then time.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
being there with you we would just forget the names we had for ourselves and just do what lovers do when the agenda is torn up and stuffed into a knot hole like secret whispered dreams a child would leave behind with their upside down innocent''''  a scene for a summer dusk.....~~*~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for those eyes and comments you all bless me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write with such grace a beauty and I enjoy all the layers and subtleties of your words. You are a conjurer and your poems are simply mesmerizing. Love & Light, EA |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
agendas have no need to hang on you, m'friend... neither do veils.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I would linger upon the other side - it is so lovely there - and I love LeeJ's response - Magic woven here D - Morning SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I remember a place like that some dream ago.  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
so much promise unsullied by agendas and told-you-so's where skin and air channel the universe of synapse playgrounds and the boundaries between want and need are faded lines in the sand. As always, you take my breath away, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you for your eyes you all bless me EA, deca you are a treat for my eyes... _______________ susan, mon amour you are cool hands on a shiver side dream...the verve of a shadow's wanton, thank you babe ms martie, yes lil neighbor there are memories... ms indi, your breathless is a dance, and I pray for more music, thank you for the reads |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice one dark |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... and would agree with EA... mesmerizing. *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The places you have been, are like pictures on a postcard.... wishing you were here. Nice write DS~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it when knotholes override agendas. |
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