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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-24 05:52 AM



Whispers Come

Body slims and trims off fat,
pocketing love that resides
in the corner of the mind.

Exercising thoughts, stretching,
thickening the muscle around the heart,
sparking wires that connect and transport
those whispers that come.

Delayed reactions, truth in dreaming,
breaking the hold, tattooing notice
upon the skin, breathing in whisper words
to ease the sting.

Numbing the screams of mixed emotions
judging only yesterday,
leaving today to destiny and the crimson flush
that a red rosed memory
brings to the cheeks.

Off rhythm, sleeping awake
eying the moon, fullness hazed
waiting, always waiting ...
spreading me thin.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-24-2005 08:42 AM).]

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2005-02-24 06:15 AM


Very descrpitve M...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-02-24 06:19 AM


...leaving today to destiny and the crimson flush
that a red rosed memory
brings...

pretty, pretty...

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
3 posted 2005-02-24 07:30 AM


Oh if removal was as easy as a slice,
I might do it once or thrice,
But if not just body but spirit
I might try to carefully fillet it,
There would be no fear of red
Let it flow if the fat be shed,
Liposuction my soul
Remove some parts and reveal the whole.

Gloom

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-02-24 11:32 AM


spreading me thin

yes...understood

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-02-24 11:36 AM



Very creative ~ and interesting. My body understands this ~ as does my heart.


Linda

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