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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-02-24 04:26 AM


Essence of my inner self,
abandoned carelessly, without murmur.
Dark dream highways,
i hitchhike down, hoping.

Lightest of hearts, of imagination,
you cannot hope to match me?
How  vast is the universe?
How strong the sun's heat?

Others are pale imitations,
your heart i place on a island,
bejeweled with dazzling sunlit ocean,
beryl skies of aqua dreams.

You planted the seeds of your eyes,
deep within the soul garden of me.
They dwell in a barren winter sweep,
disturbing in fitful sleep.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-02-24 07:29 AM


Others are pale imitations,
your heart i place on a island,
bejeweled with dazzling sunlit ocean,
beryl skies of aqua dreams.

You planted the seeds of your eyes,
deep within the soul garden of me.
They dwell in a barren winter sweep,
disturbing in fitful sleep.

I especially liked these lines....great poem!

~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-02-24 11:35 AM


You planted the seeds of your eyes,
deep within the soul garden of me.


nice lines

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