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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-02-23 11:50 PM



My eyes how they well up for you
untill I see you next. Your hands
I can imagine how  they feel
up against my own.

The warmth of your lips is so
close yet so far. Your breath
I can feel on me at night. I turn
and I see your not there.


I slip into a sleepy coma of
candy dreams of you and I
going off into time not a worry
in the world for we have each other
and nothing can take that away.

Not time not space not death. For
my love for you will always remain
here and the after.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-02-24 09:49 AM


precious
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2005-02-25 04:42 AM


It begins with the emptiness of someone away
but it's still full with love and longing
and it's a very satisfying ache,
though, still, it is an ache...

Well done.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-02-25 06:23 AM


A fine crimson gem...in the shape of a heart..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2005-02-25 07:00 PM


thank's guys

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2005-02-26 09:58 AM


Lovely...James
Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-02-26 12:50 PM


Warm heart shining here - enjoyed

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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