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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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0 posted 2005-02-23 07:57 PM



How you make me wake inside is
beyound my comprehension.I'm in
another demention when I'm with you.

The star's shoot across the dark
sleeply sky. The tree's sway back and
forth as the rain pours down.

Snuggled up inside our little cottage
near the fire. As you rub my back for hours
I finally feel at peace when I'm with you

I can accomplish anything


not yet edited for errors

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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with you
1 posted 2005-02-23 08:03 PM


"when I'm with you

I can accomplish anything"


that is a truly beautiful feeling...
enjoyed this


lgina
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since 2004-07-20
Posts 52

2 posted 2005-02-23 08:06 PM


That is the best feeling is to be with someone and that is all you know, the outside world is gone.  Enjoy.

Bloom, Gina

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