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As Shadows Splinter
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As Shadows Splinter |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
As shadows splinter, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love the way you look at Spring... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is fantastic and your title is awesome...loved the thoughts that this inspires  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
do i hallucinate are my eyes deceiving or deciphering faint brushstroke on the very tired treetops |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
soft warmth soothes a wintered heart; that is such a smooth line. I'm lovin' the A-N-T-I-C-I-P-A-T-I-O-N, choshi~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I really do love your style keep writing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A tanka extraordinaire! Spring can be such a teaser ~ just when you are enjoying her first kiss, she turns her back on you! May the coming Spring be faithful to you until Summer ushers in to take her place!   EA |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
A tanka extraordinaire! Spring can be such a teaser ~ just when you are enjoying her first kiss, she turns her back on you! May the coming Spring be faithful to you until Summer ushers in to take her place! EA Thank you ~EA for both your good thoughts, wishes and for your wisdom...warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I really do love your style keep writing! Thank you Dixie, Ditto....! ....and for the encouragement too ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
ANTICIPATION Indeed! Thank you ~Blue |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you both ~SEA and ~Sunshine.....warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
do i hallucinate are my eyes deceiving or deciphering faint brushstroke on the very tired treetops Snowflakes or blossoms, lining the horizon's breadth this hazy morning- |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
As always, when I read your work I slow down to appreciate the day. So soothing... miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know that the failure to read your work is my loss... such a loss isn't possible with a title like that... it made sure I stopped... and I'm so glad!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful !! Very much enjoyed. Chris |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
spring's caress is light offering warmth within chill buds awakening |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
your imagery is magnificant here.... this is piercing ...and leaves the reader wounded you know, i so much enjoyed this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
amazing...could feel the lonliness, the cold... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Miscellanea, I am glad that my words gave you a moment to slow-down.......warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Well, then Suthern, I will have to put more thought into my titles in the hopes that you stop more often...  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Chris.....I am glad that you enjoyed warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Ahhh! Such an eye for the non-dual, so delicately spoken Thank you Kacy
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Lee, you are a most intuitive reader warm wishes ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Dawn, So glad you enjoyed, so good to be hearing from you warm wishes ~P |
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