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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-02-23 02:16 PM

let each drop of rain

there . . .

upon your face
along your skin

slipping-

sliding-

slowly in
gentle dew kissed mist

be a reminder

of the longing hunger
of my finger tips

and . . .

their envy

of the rain

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-23 02:25 PM

Ohhhh....yeesssss Susan,
perfect.
damn perfect!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-23 03:02 PM

Thank you Donna

- hugs -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-02-23 06:21 PM

suzzsin..you make me
want more
of you
pretending
to be
the rain

thank you babe!!

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

4 posted 2005-02-23 07:12 PM

Can i be your raindrops?

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2005-02-23 10:53 PM

tap the sky
see you just made rain

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

6 posted 2005-02-24 12:03 PM

What a description nice!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-02-24 01:34 AM

mmmmm - thank you my friends - for the smiles and the warm -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2005-02-24 08:46 AM

the is excellent!

love it

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-02-24 08:48 AM

ahhh, such a very lovely feeling this gives one to read...one of perpetual sunshine enveloping...

Great write Suz, enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-02-24 08:52 AM

wonderful

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2005-02-24 10:31 AM

Thank you my friends -

SEA for the applause - you smile me

LeeJ- perpetual sunshine - thanks for your warm

P.S. - your wonderful feels wonderful

Hugs to all - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

12 posted 2005-02-25 06:32 AM

So little words.... so much expressed..a delight..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2005-02-25 07:42 AM

well done Susan!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2005-02-25 10:57 AM

thank you Goldenrose - for your eye touch-

Thank you Susan for your warm-

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2005-02-25 01:11 PM

Oh, yessssssssssssssssssssss. *S* This is absolutely beautiful!!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2005-02-25 03:25 PM

Thanks Southern, my friend - for your drawl -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2005-02-25 05:08 PM

Lovely visuals Susan, I'm picturing a rainbow in there somewhere.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

18 posted 2005-02-25 06:21 PM

Thank you bluesie - yes - definitely -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

19 posted 2005-02-26 12:20 PM

Beautiful...

JL

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

20 posted 2005-02-26 03:48 AM

WOW! Smooth as silk! This glistens!

miscellanea

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2005-02-26 09:13 AM

Susan~

Ah, ... reminding me of a beautiful song, "Love Come Down"~ by Tim Nielsen~

How gently your loving words flow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

22 posted 2005-02-26 09:21 AM

A lovely keeper, Susan...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

23 posted 2005-02-26 10:00 AM

Nice...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

24 posted 2005-02-26 12:46 PM

My heartfelt pleasure to see your warm this morning, my friends - thank you all most kindly -

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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