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In Limbo, Alone
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In Limbo, Alone |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Hushed, this voice adrift in skies darker than the midnight of blue. No stars shine; no echoes are heard and though, as if not quite a reality it resides within reality. Surcease time no motion, no backward, or forward only stillness waiting, to find a place yet un-named, un-known where the clock again tick tocks in rhythm against empty spaces existing not here, not there or anywhere. In limbo, alone. no, wait a minute, nah, still nothing... my give a DAMN is busted. (jodee) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Such sadness this makes me feel Donna....and emptiness. I do hope all is well. Hugs, Chris |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
am ok Chrissy, no worries mate. *w* {come along, share the good times while you can... I beg your pardon, I never promised you a rose garden....lynn anderson } |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this a lot Aunt Donna, it fits my mood today.. this was my favorite part - "Surcease time no motion, no backward, or forward only stillness" "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well done Donna.... Sending hugs your way. In the midst of winter, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you write the alone exceptionally well - beautiful flow -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna I will trust you when you say that all is well and for us not to worry. Your poetry has been sad and lonely as of late ~ and you write it superbly!!! I understand how we, as poets, can draw on past memories and feelings to write about in the present. You are a wonderful poetess, Gentle One.  Loving hugs, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone.  Sometimes I have to remind myself that life is like a vapor, it's gone in just a blinking of an eye...(Josh Graycin) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
waiting, to find a place yet un-named, un-known where the clock again tick tocks in rhythm against empty spaces existing not here, not there or anywhere. You say it so well Donna dear~ Some days I see it as the lesser of two evils, at least no one gets hurt that way. Hugs you~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse is reaching, and finding much success...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this cries for a hug very well done, so so beautifully sad my dear gentle spirit |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I understand and feel this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
flypaper sticky hugs got handfulls of em if ya wanna enjoyed your art here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
limbo can be ok....long as we also realize who we are and like ourselves...I don't mind coming to this place once in a while, it's not scary, not lonely, but in fact, it is when I best know, I'm never alone. This was an exceptional read...thank you |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When solitude is our companion, we find our purest thoughts. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*understanding* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks and hugs to all. Your all wonderful. |
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