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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2005-02-23 08:45 AM


Close of day gathers me
Into some sound rhyme
Lush texture where shadows collect
And triplets dye the light
Falling into purple hush
Casting wild infinity to sea
Ohhh, the incessant surf
Tugging shards of prophesy
Like the closing eyes of a wish
Holding warm flowing mesh
A thing of beauty
Unaltered or learned
Feeling your anguish swell beneath my breast
In you, I have touched the nuclei of passion
Tomorrow becomes a neon sign
Sighs evoking mere moments in time
Soft
Profound
Reverence
Everlasting
Larger then we could bear
Yet know of it’s life
Longing for the music
That a willing God is near

Lost inside you, is that ok?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-24-2005 10:07 AM).]

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-02-23 10:28 AM


Mmmmmmm - sounds like a lovely place to be lost in - beautifully written -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-02-23 10:47 AM


"Longing for the music
That a willing God is near"

I agree with Susan.  Great write.

JL



Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-02-23 10:51 AM



God certainly is in someone who can write so awesome-Lee!

Love & God's Twilight,
Linda

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4 posted 2005-02-23 01:44 PM


I like this very much, Lee... your images are fantastic! *S*
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2005-02-23 11:35 PM


Fantastic.
What a spread you set lady.
TD

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