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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-02-22 06:13 PM


Taste the past from present times,
Drown forsakened in Remembrance-
dawn awakens more than dreams
thoughts of thoughts;
Left inbetween complimenting.

Devoured all those times with you,
Hands touching more than images of mind-
escaping from my aching
your the sand held between my grasp;
seeping through those emptied thoughts.

Tears run dried before they hide,
Crippling those passageways-
placing salt within the wounds
the pain before i can't remember;
Suffering the fall of Remembrance.

Another day that pulls me through,
Waiting holding for the truth-
sorrow lending off the soul
let me remember what i knew;
Before death becomes my remembrance.



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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-02-22 09:23 PM


Interesting, deep piece. Enjoyed. Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-02-22 10:26 PM


~swimming inside the depths of You~

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-23 05:34 AM


I relate to this
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