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A Quiet Day with You
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A Quiet Day with You |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A Quiet Day with You Muted colors visiting on a cool and quite, overcast day. Blending recall - your warm skin, your breath, and scent, your systematic flirty way… Sweetness as the day would pass by Nothing to do, on a quiet day, you and I… Happily, the hours seem to fade away, with conversation between your caring, and holding me, as we passively sway the time away… Pensive reaction, love-sharing actions, you and I, on a quiet day smiling away the time having no reason, no rhyme. Simply, a cool and quiet loving day… |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It sounds as though a quiet day with you would be equally as wonderful.   EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...having no reason, no rhyme... sounds good enough reason, JL... a just because kind of day.  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , Don't you just love those kind of days , only wish there could be more of them Hope |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Days like this are a treasure. You expressed it well...thanks for taking me there!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JL How wonderful...I'll take one or two of those! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I'll take a few of these as well... sounds so relaxing, so comforting. Lovely. Well described. Wish I was there! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember days like those |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to reminisce with a friend with whom mutual fondness and compassion flows is a God sent, and you have penned that happiness well... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Of the mind that the best relationships are founded in friendship, and to practice the art of being...is the softest spoken love there is. Always enjoy your gifted writes JL...and appreciate your kind encouragements as well. TD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as we passively sway the time away… I want some of those... about a lifetime's worth? *S* Beautiful work!! |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Exactly what I've been missing lately - days with no worries, no appointments - days just because. Well written - I enjoyed. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Beautifully expressed! This is so calming and soothing! to the library! A pleasure to read. This is the perfect place to end tonight's reading! miscellanea |
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