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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-22 07:33 AM



foot prints of kinu
on limestone
raindrops are walking toes
with quill tip songs

mottle mouthed dapple
brings morning clouds
in her suitcase imagine
of arm carry surround

like lovers embraced
with pillows and dreams
obnubilation of laughter
then frenzied gypsies

searching for nikko's assurance

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dark  (series sooth)

scribblenote..
kinu is pure silk,
nikko
is sunshine or sunlight,
image is
a break between the storms
how the rain plays
as puppy spit
on the gravestones

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-02-22 07:40 AM


mottle mouthed dapple
brings morning clouds
in her suitcase imagine
of arm carry surround


was thinking of you this morn, while listening to the news...and was wondering when you were going to write about it...

I hope you and yours are safe...sending hugs and prayers for all of you, you certainly have had more then your share...

Big Hugs....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2005-02-22 08:29 AM


can feeel
the rain
thru her laughter
to her tempest
you wet me with her moods

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-22 10:27 AM


excellent!
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-02-22 10:50 AM


Nikko is my neighbor - each morning we greet one another - maybe you should head north?  

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2005-02-22 11:14 AM




the break between the storms is what keeps us going with hope.  

and there is always a break.  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Martie
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California
6 posted 2005-02-22 11:28 AM


DS

Yesterday here in Glendora, we had very heavy rain, wind, thunder and lightning, a possible tornado and a rainbow!  It was really something!  Stay safe on those wet roads.  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-02-22 01:05 PM



This embraces
like long gone relatives...

excellent write, DS

MGROVES
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8 posted 2005-02-25 01:06 AM


liked the way you expressed this~


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