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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-21 08:48 PM



The sky
a colour
I just remember.

Clouds
are white lines of poetry.
Around me
ambers and oranges whisper.

And I am at peace
for I am—
Lazarus

in love with the leaves
of a single tree.

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-02-21 08:59 PM


This is so beautiful..
wonderful expression and images.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-02-22 10:42 AM



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3 posted 2005-02-22 01:08 PM


I like to copy my favorite lines... but here... I'd be copying them all.
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-05-01 02:40 PM


top ten.

beautiful.

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