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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-02-21 04:17 PM


Music Avenue
  
Neighboring thought present, approaching
playwright’s hand bringing existence
Streams of similarity
Melodious intensity
Profound
Fascinated streetlights reproduce
Pouring like fall leaves
golden breathtaking colors

Spirit reshapes as a fountain pours…
tenderness
Perhaps at times,
emptier and a little more spent
But…alas
To this acceleration,
clearly yielding
the secret place
Submersible love
Immersed Life
our universal hues
life-giving womb
Offering praises of promise
Gratitude
Only a single gesture would suffice
We pass thoughts,
unspoken…
Stop and listen
Tones of beauteous authority
delicately embroidered
within our fabric of moment
Time, time….
To all spiritual decrees
Submittal
Acceptance
Ermine of our dreams
Lighted gems of hope
spawn from memory
Transformed like the splash
of aqua blue seas
imbued on canvas
Graceful strokes…
Thick and alive
epic of pearls,
a union
Richer for the experience
Supple without selfishness,
to the blessings of freedom’s affection
We are passion’s lovers
twined within a patio of Athens
Clear eyes fashioned,
gentle moons smiling
Tapping into intricate meanings
of such never before perceived
Contaminate me with this complacent nod
What mileage concertos the echoes of Gods?
A social voice
identity matching generations
Of influence, by which
impulses and inhabits
His methods
Saturating energy, yet,
no one seems to want to hear
This heart jewel shining,
clearest brightest blue
And within this miracle,
I listen to the fragrace of you
Your voice, trusted,
here we are,
in our souls again
Oh for the experience
There we become free, when we free all else
As a dew drop smiles
on a certainty which never ends
All history within
a crystal sea of silence
Dissolving blissful nectar,
we are a miracle
On music avenue



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-02-21 04:56 PM


"All history within
a crystal sea of silence"

~ I had a hard time choosing my favourite lines! ~ They were all wonderfully rich and intoxicating!

May all your roads in life be filled with such music!


Linda

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2 posted 2005-02-21 04:58 PM


Saturating energy, yet,
no one seems to want to hear
This heart jewel shining,
clearest brightest blue
And within this miracle,
I listen to the fragrace of you
Your voice, trusted,
here we are,
in our souls again
Oh for the experience

I like this very much, Lee... you took me down many avenues with this great write! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2005-02-21 05:02 PM


There we become free, when we free all else
As a dew drop smiles
on a certainty which never ends


This kind of freedom is a most beautiful tune!

Wonderful "Music Avenue"!

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-02-22 10:41 AM


you always write where many people can pick out different lines they like

I like to see what strikes people, by what they quote

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2005-02-22 05:23 PM


"As a dew drop smiles
on a certainty which never ends
All history within
a crystal sea of silence
Dissolving blissful nectar,
we are a miracle
On music avenue"

.
I think I've been there too.
Great write Lee J.

JL



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-02-22 06:06 PM


Another great write from your magical pen Lee.
Well done!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

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