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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-02-20 09:56 PM



Unicorns and
waltzing witches
the inkblot sky

how am i to analyze?

the ponies ride free
cloud wisp, wisp of cloud
follow to find the starting line
hanging on,
where'd it all go?

3 steps forward 2 steps back
the box of crackerjacks lost its prize

rush rush - hurry to catch up

who paints the sky - is the it really I?

flip flop
tock tick tick the tock
30 seconds just sailed by

the chimes at noon
salute the flag
the open casket
bury the dead

and the laundry still flies
off steeplechase lines,

the purple pronouns
the polka dot sky
the branches pray
but empty trees
lose illusions
when dark worlds realign

picking petals
i shield my eyes

suite sean blue eyes
can't you come back
just one more time?

this is really
just a tossed word salad,
a beggar's bowl
of this and that

some jackson pollack lullaby,

but glad you peeked,
cause i'm feeling unplugged
and just had to unwind.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-02-20 10:08 PM


cool write
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-02-20 10:29 PM


A tossed word salad?  Ahh, but the dressing is divine.
TD

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2005-02-21 07:22 AM


oh yeah...this is candy canes
in super glue...enjoyed it ms inky

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-02-21 10:55 AM


loved this...filled with gentle visuals
Well done

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-02-21 12:25 PM


Interesting - I was thinking earlier of comparing myself to a fruit salad (hehe) - enjoyed this tumble of words M -

s

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
6 posted 2005-02-22 08:09 PM


You belong up there with Kerouac, Michele.
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2005-02-22 09:33 PM


thanks for partaking in the silly salad

bklynboy
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florida
8 posted 2005-02-23 06:54 AM



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2005-02-23 11:36 AM


~ in a capricious mood, were you? ~ and delightfully so!


Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2005-02-24 02:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
11 posted 2005-02-24 02:43 PM


If you needed a little validation,we are here to do that. lovely words you typed out here. marty
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