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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-02-20 03:33 PM


Lines

Green blades damp beneath
My toes,
Earthworm bulges descrying
Spring
A break in gray, sunlight
Streams
Robin's eye upon a
meal
Scent of air inhaled
to bone
My pen has felt to write
This day.

There are things I cannot
Change
Truths faced real from inward
Out
As there are roads that call
To me
Me, eyeing all such things
To be
Each line is mine to think
Upon
My pen has felt to write
This day.

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-20 03:51 PM


and I for one am glad of it!  It's still a little cold here for burying my feet in the grass and sensing the new life underfoot, but there are hints of Spring all around, just for the looking.  

A pleasure to read!
    
  msicellanea

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2 posted 2005-02-20 04:00 PM


All your poems are worth reading between the lines as well.

May your Spring be just around the corner, Dear Poetess.

Love & Spring Light,
Linda

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3 posted 2005-02-20 04:56 PM


Karilea

I have experienced so many days such as this.  How well I can relate to your well written words.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-02-20 04:57 PM


yes....indeed.
hugging you, Chrislane

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5 posted 2005-02-20 05:01 PM


a true gift when your pen does its magic
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6 posted 2005-02-20 05:57 PM


"There are things I cannot
Change
Truths faced real from inward
Out
As there are roads that call
To me
Me, eyeing all such things
To be
Each line is mine to think
Upon"

Isn't that the way of it!  Like the lines alot, Sunshine!  Happy journey down those roads.   ....jo

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7 posted 2005-02-20 05:58 PM


I sometimes feel like I have felt to write too....this day included. My felt is the surface I seem be consigned to though, here in the shade of this big black ball......

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8 posted 2005-02-21 01:01 AM


Karilea, it is always a joy to read your poetry.
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california
9 posted 2005-02-21 05:10 AM


yes it is always a pleasure to read
your lines


JL
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10 posted 2005-02-22 06:16 PM


"Each line is mine to think
Upon
My pen has felt to write
This day."


And a great write it is too...

JL


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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2005-02-23 12:20 PM


If I may read between the lines ...
Beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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