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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Night presses down upon the sky, squeezing the sun's shining to a narrow band It would be difficult to stand and watch a day go away were not the end with such dignity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Huan Yi Yet I still have many difficult days. Enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I enjoy your style |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Like this alot, John. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent, and I enjoyed the link/poem you invited me to...somewhat similar.. thanx. Barry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is simply stunning. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 Night presses down upon the sky, squeezing the sun's shining to a narrow band this was awesome.... Yup, yup, yup, this I've supped many an evening... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You manage to say much within a few lines. Lovely, marty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ 'something/someone' sent me in search of some of your fabulous pennings~ What a treat for me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Night presses down upon the sky, squeezing the sun's shining to a narrow band" so beautiful. You just can hide your tellent!!! |
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