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Open Poetry #35

Meaningless Illusion

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2005-02-20 12:29 PM

Lonely tearless cries
Suppressed, concealed by darkness
So nobody gets hurt
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The side we show the world
Is just a meaningless illusion
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-02-20 12:33 PM

PazSqual
Perhaps, perhaps. Enjoyed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-02-20 12:50 PM

Thank goodness, there are those close enough to share and care about all that the world does not see.

TD

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-02-20 01:03 PM

http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem86.html

You may like this . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-20 02:01 PM

I have to agree

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-02-20 04:00 PM

Put up a mirror....
so many will see..

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-02-20 06:23 PM

Very nice...

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-02-20 06:31 PM

Would agree with a few exceptions. Some poetry is one of those...and this is no illusion.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-02-21 01:18 PM

I like this very much... look forward to reading more of your work!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-02-21 01:56 PM

feeling every word of this one....hugs.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2005-02-22 02:09 PM

wow....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

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