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Our Love
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Our Love |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Our Love Though darkness ebbs with morning's amber glow And daybreak glistens softly with rebirth, Our love is not revived nor does it grow, But in its constancy is found its worth. Though seasons cycle ever endlessly And Winter's frigid death gives way to Spring, Unwavering in rooted certainty, Our love provides the songs that sirens sing. Though passing years must rob us of our youth And leave once vibrant bodies weak and frail, There must remain one never yielding truth, That love, steadfast and pure, will never fail. Thou chaos rains as havoc rules supreme While draped in perfect love we'll live our dream. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how romantic! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is a treasure and a fact that is often so easily overlooked in a heated moment, and I am so pleased to be reminded. Wonderful write. TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'm so glad I clicked this. Your thinking and rhyme are awesome. Yes, hidden in this is the true meaning of love. This is definitely a keeper to read again and again when tempted by a glitsy love. You've hit this on the nail! miscellanea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bravo. Much enjoyed your poem, David. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How nice to see you David - It's always a pleasure to see one of your flawless sonnets grace our boards... I'm smiling... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this bought a thought to mind while reading...loving someone when it's easy to love them, is not the key...but when it's most difficult...for it is the difficult times which strengthens...fabulous! |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Thank you, Nan. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
very lovely sonnet romantic and perfectly worded I truly enjoyed reading this Liz |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
David, I have always loved your poetry, Your poems are filled with so much love and romance! ~ARh  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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