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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2005-02-20 10:42 AM

When I think of you,
I think of the times
We used to say,
The way we used to be,
Together,
I think of a morning dawn,
And a warm sun,
I want to run to you,
I think of you,
Let the days go by
And the days of your smile,
Smiling back through loving years,
I think of you,
Sometimes,
When you are not here with me,
I held my arms around me,
Think of the dream,
You and I both together,
Life,
Sometimes,
realise the time between love and space,
I know,
You are away from me,
But then,
Your memory still on my mind,
Wishing the time would run fast,
Now the time would let
My heart stay at the past,
I think of you,
I lay my head on bed,
And I think of your smile,
Smiling back at me,
I think of you day and night,
I smiled back at
Those memories of us,
When I think of you,
I realise,
How much I have missed you
When I think of you,
I think of you only....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-02-20 10:44 AM

Vandana, this is great!

I know this very well, and felt it. Gonna keep it too

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-02-20 10:47 AM

touching emotions here

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-02-20 10:52 AM

You have written well the aching heart. To miss someone this much, so as to want to remain tells a special love story. The future is where dreams become reality.
Hugs,
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-02-20 11:41 AM

one of my favorites of yours - lovely-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-20 06:31 PM

Great write Vandana!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-02-20 06:34 PM

Her heart is showing through this. Thanks for sharing. :;hugs: ....jo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-02-21 05:36 PM

I think of you,
Sometimes,
When you are not here with me,
I held my arms around me,

A very beautiful love poem, dear vandana.

Love, Margherita

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2005-02-22 07:10 AM

filled with love and longing!

You have expressed your heart well!

Love ya!
~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2005-02-22 05:33 PM

"I think of you day and night,
I smiled back at
Those memories of us,
When I think of you,
I realise,
How much I have missed you
When I think of you,
I think of you only...."

.
WOW!
Hit home...... BIG Time.

Enjoyed.

JL

lgina
Member

since 2004-07-20

Posts 52

10 posted 2005-02-22 08:05 PM

Great and strong write. You put into words what our minds and heart often feel. hugs to you.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2005-02-23 12:41 PM

1derful write!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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