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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2005-02-20 07:59 AM


A Rich Sense of Self

He is there,
always in the background
when I need that uplifting talk.

I wonder how he knows,
when he realizes
that just seeing that smile,
remembering those lunches
will bring a tear, a happy one
trying to figure out where I go from here.

Being happy for me, being supportive
even if a distance away today,
loving being with me, even if in thought alone
gives this friendship a richness
that everyone deserves.

And in those early morning hours when
awakening is the hardest,
I can catch him, too, and
share in his wealth
that which is him.

I wish for him to feel as I feel,
that he is rich in self and is meaningful and significant to me.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-02-20 09:41 AM


touching piece, M

I hope your friend gets to read it

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-02-20 09:48 AM


I wish for him to feel as I feel,

~*~

and not just in the up times,
but all times, when the gray comes in,
before the shadows are chased away...

it is important that they know
all of the times of innermost feeling...


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-02-20 10:12 AM


Maureen,
I'm sure this will fly over him and leave it's mark.

vandana
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4 posted 2005-02-20 10:29 AM


enjoyed this write
Susan
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5 posted 2005-02-20 11:46 AM


It is a special gift when someone makes us feel their love and friendship - even from a distance, and what a lovely gift you give in return-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SmartChick
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6 posted 2005-02-20 01:13 PM


I really like this. Maybe you should let him know how you feel.
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7 posted 2005-02-20 06:22 PM


Enjoyed this.

~Alli~

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8 posted 2005-02-20 09:47 PM


When someone can give another the feeling that they are always there for them, even when not with them, they have given an extremely precious gift. We all hope for someone like that. If you have one, you are blessed....very nicely said, Maureen
JL
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9 posted 2005-02-22 06:09 PM


So darn nice!
You should read this to him...
Yep, you should.
Enjoyed.

JL

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10 posted 2005-06-26 01:55 AM


A birthday bump

well deserved

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2005-06-28 08:16 AM


My words leave very little marks...

I truly don't even know why I write anymore
except for the friendships I have made on here that I am not ready to give up.

M

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