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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh heck no! If that is all you have to offer I will take it...hold it...treasure it...and love you 'til time itself doth bow to our love. Absolutely love this Snow! It is HOT, HOT, HOT! This is the best damn thing I have seen at pipTalk in ages. Woohoo! Love it! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you... make me blush, but i wouldn't change that, for anything. i'm glad you like this one.. but the best thing in ages ? my dear kevin have you read your own work ? or susan's ... or ratleader... but, i love how you make me believe you believe it. *smile*  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I try reading my own stuff...but it just doesn't come across as being as wonderful as your work. LOL! Susan I agree is a most amazing writer. She has some very exquisite lines. You ladies have such a wonderful grasp of vocabulary and diction...mmm...no wonder I can't wait to read each new post. I sadly must confess I haven't read ratleader ever. Since he comes recommended by you though...I pledge I am going to start paying more attention to his posts. (I think it is the whole rat thing you know...) LOL! I hate them. Sorry ratleader if you are reading this comment. No offense intended. Just grew up in a place where rats were not some story book fantasy...they damn well lived next door to our house....and you would always see one peeking at you with little yellow eyes at least once a day. Brrr! Gives me the shakes just thinking about it. Anyway I really am headed off to watch TV for a while. At least I am going to try to get up from this computer. Been sitting here for 3 hours now. LOL! Bye bye dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Snow....another beauty! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief woman....you say it like it's nothing...whew...awesome, yet again.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You know, Snow dear, I must agree with Kevin- you are by far one of the most talented, creative, and amazing poets I've ever read - and I say that with whole hearted sincerity- this piece is no exception - it is stirring and exquisite - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I can't imagine it mattering....ourselves...that's all any of us have to offer, that has any meaning at all. Gosh this poem is beautiful....I read it through three, four times before I came down here.... Hi E-V -- sometimes I hate it too, much too much Missouri farm kid in me, to like it....but a friend named me that once after making words out of the two syllables of my real last name....a liege is a liege even of rodents, as the Pied Piper can attest... so like Eor's tail (Eor is another nickname of mine, to a very select few -- from my initials --)....it's attached! Thanks for readin' my stuff....I appreciate so much any reply I get, to anything I write, that it would sound like lying if I tried to say it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Snow, if it doesn't matter...then I don't know what would....gorgeous multidemensional poetry as always, luv.  .....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If giving all you have to offer doesn't matter... then it's offered to the wrong one. *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such beautiful seduction, and to the point. Fabulous poetry, Snow~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~bump~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This matters...your poetry matters...thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
darlin, when it comes down in truth, that is all any of us have to gift another we love and cherish so... remarkable poem, which should be valued by him as his greatest light and moment...with more yet to embrace you both.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow, wow, wow!!! JL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and I damn near miss this one.... that'll teach me to get sick huh?  Beautiful work lady snow, and yep, it matters because offering yourself is one beautiful offering...... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
powerful mix of eros and vulnerability, what more could anyone offer? Wow!!!! ~P |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to. |
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