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0 posted 2005-02-19 06:16 PM





          the little peach tree

            wakes
                         naked

          oh how she blushes!

© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-19 06:34 PM



We've weeks to go
before spring blooms here
so I'll peek in on yours...

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2 posted 2005-02-19 06:59 PM


Yes, Ed...they are so pretty...like they've painted just the tip of their nails, pink.  I'm so glad this happens in February!  
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3 posted 2005-02-19 07:30 PM


OMG....!!! I love this, RatL.   ....jo
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4 posted 2005-02-19 07:42 PM


You see the miracles of nature and share them so beautifully.

Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2005-02-19 10:29 PM


blushed and bare
she dreams
of wearing fruit again

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6 posted 2005-02-19 11:00 PM


absolutely delightful-

susan

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7 posted 2005-02-20 12:03 PM


for personal reasons (of course)

this made me cry. ...... memories..
*sigh*

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9 posted 2005-02-20 03:18 AM


A freind of mine suggested I read you. Love this piece. Now I can see why everyone keeps telling me that you are indeed a talent. Bravo!
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10 posted 2005-02-20 01:05 PM




Very good.
Issa would smile.

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11 posted 2005-02-20 06:23 PM


*grin*

~Alli~

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12 posted 2005-02-21 01:11 PM


What a beautiful delight this is!!! This vivid visual brightens my day! *S*

As for you being a talent indeed... *G* To quote a line from one of my favorite musicals... "told you so." *G*

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13 posted 2005-02-21 02:26 PM


we had snow today, but bulbs are popping up all over, spring is indeed in the air....




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14 posted 2005-02-25 07:53 PM


Love it, marty
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15 posted 2005-02-25 09:08 PM


A delicate little write.
Delightful.
TD

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16 posted 2005-02-25 09:47 PM


Ed, you did it again!  How can you take so few words to write such a delicate and witty gem?  Fun to read!
              miscellanea

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17 posted 2005-02-25 10:09 PM


Awww....perfect!
hugs, Chris


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