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miscellanea
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0 posted 2005-02-19 01:53 PM



Shadow and Sunlight
Dancing flecks among leaves breeze
Scintillating life.

(Who dances in the lead?)

© Copyright 2005 Cathy Farmer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-19 02:11 PM


good question

lovely write

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2 posted 2005-02-19 02:54 PM


The sunshine leads and the shadow follows in step!

Missy, your spirited personality comes through your poetry!

Big, warm hug,
Linda

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3 posted 2005-02-19 03:04 PM


I loved this...
I think God leads.
TD

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4 posted 2005-02-19 03:05 PM


Without light, there would be no shadow.  A lovely poem!  
Susan
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5 posted 2005-02-19 03:06 PM


I think they dance in tandem -

Enjoyed this - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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6 posted 2005-02-19 04:07 PM


  good one, sis!  For me, ideally it would be a balance.  love ya ....jo
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7 posted 2005-02-19 04:18 PM


Oh, I love this, misc', it's beautiful. I can see the dance ...

who leads? There is perfect harmony between the two! LIFE leads.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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8 posted 2005-02-19 05:03 PM



Ah, so THIS is where everyone
has come to dance!

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9 posted 2005-02-19 06:25 PM


Enjoyed this.

~Alli~

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10 posted 2005-02-19 09:10 PM


The simplest questions....they always turn out to be the hardest to answer....

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11 posted 2005-02-19 09:41 PM


LOVE IT!
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12 posted 2005-02-19 10:39 PM


who?
you silly
that's who

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13 posted 2005-02-20 12:35 PM


LOL, I give up.
Maybe I need to ponder this? LOL, I guess, they are really like mirrored images, or as the canyon shout and its echo.

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14 posted 2005-02-20 12:07 PM


Quite lovely!
Soft yet vivid images...
Great write, Cathy,
as usual, of course!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

miscellanea
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15 posted 2005-02-20 03:05 PM


I have so much enjoyed all your different viewpoints.  I guess it's like the age old question about which came first the chicken or the egg!  I believe someone here has answered who really is in the lead.  All interesting insights--thanks!

              cathy  

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (02-20-2005 03:38 PM).]

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16 posted 2005-04-06 08:02 PM


Cathy - I just danced with this - Paul
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