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Thunder Bay |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Rain beats against the shuddered screen. The sky is grey in a shroud of cloud. Wind bends the tops of savaged trees. No wings can fly away. The storm roars loud upon the world. The angered waves are high. God help all sailors out to sea and those in the sadness of their lives. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sounds familiar good write |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a good write~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
God help all sailors out to sea and those in the sadness of their lives. This had my complete attention before I read these lines... I cannot tell you how much they touch me... Excellent write!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Wow, loved this whole bunches....keep them coming |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well written and much enjoyed. In the midst of winter, |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
This is extremely moving. Your description of the harsh randomness of nature and grief/the vulnerability of man. I will keep reading your poems. So glad to make your acquaintance here. The kindness that comes through your poetry is so welcome in these pages. Shenachie |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
war. |
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