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One day to us is but a thousand
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One day to us is but a thousand |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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The shadows whisper to me. I pretend that I do not sense their presence or hear their angered plea. For I have never understood what they want. Maybe this life is just for chaos, the next giving light to confusion. Making progression possible and shadows less likely to scream in whispers. A next evolution of easier transgression, fewer mistakes to haunt the inner core. No more memories of how it felt to be wrong about life, love and worth. Yet I wonder if death of this energy must mean the death of flesh. Maybe realization is the doorway to the next. A thousand life times in what we thought was one. All the while the key was learning without repeating and stumbling towards the light. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
We can always hope, can't we?  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes hope and pray and teach~ humanity~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
to the next. A thousand life times in what we thought was one. All the while the key was learning without repeating and stumbling towards the light i guess we are all just doing time until we can rest  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm...one day is but a thousand. How about one day is 1440 seconds! Just kidding Susan. Love this poem. It has got me thinking of time. Bravo my friend. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
yes - to learn and move forward - if I could just get off the treadmill, maybe I'd make some ground - enjoyed this greatly - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"All the while the key was learning without repeating and stumbling towards the light." ~ and it can be downright difficult to get it all right the first time around! But eventually, I believe we do! Susan, that was a remarkable write! Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a  Susie...A definite "must read", so... duly libraried! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You bring to light some excellent thoughts here Susan. As always, they are conveyed in your unique insight, and heart speak. Always enjoy your poetry. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ah, and I thought no one would understand my thoughts in this...not that it is complicated but rather, bizarre. you people rock.... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do believe you are right in this write good thoughts here |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
~something of hope...yes~ much enjoyed~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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