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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-02-18 11:49 AM



fingers delicate

tenderness the dusk surrounds

belief eternal

©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-18 11:58 AM


so soft, and lovely.  Nicely done!  
Martie
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2 posted 2005-02-18 01:00 PM


icebox

This is beautiful!  

MGROVES
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3 posted 2005-02-18 01:32 PM


yes, soft and tender~
liked this~


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4 posted 2005-02-18 03:04 PM


icebox
Good one.

iliana
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5 posted 2005-02-18 09:13 PM


belief eternal.....born of dreams, much to ponder so it seems.   ....jo
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wow
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7 posted 2005-02-19 05:46 AM


fingers delicate

clutching my thumb trustingly

metaphor complete

*  *  *

(Pardon me, friend, I'm lousy at these things)

And once again, yer lovely




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8 posted 2005-02-19 06:40 PM


Nice write!

~Alli~

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Margherita
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9 posted 2005-02-19 08:08 PM



Out of melancholy of dusk you give voice to beauty.

Love, Margherita

Susan
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10 posted 2005-02-19 11:12 PM


lovely -

Susan

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Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-02-25 10:31 AM


"fingers delicate

tenderness the dusk surrounds

belief eternal"


delicate tenderness
belief surrounds
dusk eternal fingers

hmmm...just playing with your words...they taste so sweet..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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