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Nature's Way
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Nature's Way |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Truth knocked me against the wall, softly Remember lighting a fire? Tell me, were those mind hands, mine or ours? You’re that kind of sound in the rain~ Soothing like songbirds Even Frodo doesn’t speak of such things Milky white songs of morning doves Cicada’s on a warm afternoon Soft and sensual magic sounds Great moments like O’Keeffe’s “An Orchid” A Midnight Sun speaks of, Renoir’s “Dance in the City” Serene headlights, glowing strings of romance Like music slowly lifting us toward Heaven Softer shades of pastel, evokes you are close Touching theoretical implementations Painting “A Girl with a Watering Can”~ Whispering Radcliffe’s “Moonlit Sail”~ Come hither, this nature, walk into my still Turn around and I’m there Let your eyes caress precious moments See this beauty, which survives without human intervention Touch the Eastern Seaboard where North South & West join Play with my smile Look, shhhhhh, listen reach out and feel the heart of nature... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-18-2005 09:47 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your a beautiful lady, lee and i love what you write~ thanks~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Well you played with my smile, good morning sweet. And the top of the morning to you.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I like this very much, Lee... especially the ending!! Well done! *S* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Lee, This is beautiful! I am always impressed at how well you integrate the literate and the emotional aspects of your writing so seamlessly and fluidly...touching nature along with you this morning ~P |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Look, shhhhhh, listen reach out and feel the heart of nature..." . Listening to Lee J's poetry!! Great write Ms. Poet/Philosopher Lee J. JL  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very nice, Lee  M |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
LeeJ Who could resist you, your smile, your warmth, your words. You are amazing. best marty |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LeeJ, I especially liked the reference to Frodo....this was like taking a walk in the morning dew at sunrise.....so enjoyed! .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a feel-good write I'm keeping it in my library...I know I'll need it later |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Come hither, this nature, walk into my still" ~ Oh, yes! I enjoyed the natural flow of words and imagery.  Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ....you have a way, my friend, and it always is beautiful! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lee The imagery throughout was nothing short of breathtaking. An absolute favourite of mine! Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a most delightful way with seduction in this piece LeeJ. Loved it all. TD |
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