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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-02-18 06:06 AM




Do you know who you are?
Underneath all those scars,
I've lie'd awake, I'm wondering-
Do you have a freind or someone to hold
When all you're world seems so small,
Or do you even love at all

Wondering if i'm the only one-
that cares if you make
It through another night alone,
As i know how it feels-
To cry alone without
Someone to hold me tight.

Let me sooth away those tears
Let me drive you so insane
Let me Melt you like a Snowflake
And kiss away your pain.

Cos you know that i want you-
From the dawning of the sun
Till the falling of the night,
I'll keep you forever close to heart
And never let you out of sight,
I'll show you everyday your special-
Think everyway like you
You know this is love don't you feel.

Let me sooth away those tears
Let me drive you so insane
Let me Melt you like a Snowflake
And kiss away your pain.

Loves never going to be a perfect game-
Don't leave me here alone
Keep breathing never let me go,
Don't say or make your last goodbye-
Or go too far and touch heavens sky,
Stay and wipe you're tears away-
Heavens going to be here arms opened wide
Never let go of this love it feels so right.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-02-18 06:19 AM


Interesting.    I'd have said "do they know who they are".

Dave

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2 posted 2005-02-18 06:26 AM


this is really beautiful~
nice t know that there is someone out there that one can count on with love~
thankyou


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-02-18 07:06 AM


Lee this would be great as a song...would be nice to hear ou sing it~

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


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