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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

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0 posted 2005-02-18 05:34 AM

On withered limbs
left bare by endless winters,
fresh blossoms appear-
they burst forth with hidden life,
and glisten in the morning dew.

~P

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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1 posted 2005-02-18 05:44 AM

I like this a lot.

Dave

choshi
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2 posted 2005-02-18 06:34 AM

Thank you Dave.....~P

MGROVES

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california

3 posted 2005-02-18 06:44 AM

this is nice~

choshi
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4 posted 2005-02-18 08:19 AM

Thank you ~MG....

suthern

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5 posted 2005-02-18 08:44 AM

What a beautiful and timely reminder that bleak doesn't last forever. *S*

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-02-18 09:07 AM

they always have, always will, sooner then later...hugs to you for a lovely morning expression, opps, there, see, I can see you blooming...smile and hugs

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2005-02-18 09:47 AM

they always have, always will, sooner then later...hugs to you for a lovely morning expression, opps, there, see, I can see you blooming...smile and hugs

Smiles and Hugs back...Thank you Lee...

~P

choshi
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New York

8 posted 2005-02-18 09:48 AM

Thank you ~S, As hopeless as bleak might be, it passes. ~P

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2005-02-19 01:18 AM

thank you for the hope

iliana
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USA

10 posted 2005-02-19 01:33 AM

You do waka well! Love this, Paul.

....jo

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2005-02-19 01:58 AM

Thank you! Your lovely poem has me looking forward to spring! In fact, I feel as though I have just been kissed by spring!

May the coming Spring bear many blossoms in your life!

EA

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

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Florida

12 posted 2005-02-19 07:42 AM

And a fresh crop of strawberries is now on the market in Florida. Have faith, Spring is on the way! best, marty

Sunshine

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13 posted 2005-02-19 08:09 AM

Soon, Paul, soon...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2005-02-19 08:23 AM

choshi
They always do. Enjoyed

choshi
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New York

15 posted 2005-02-19 03:53 PM

Thank you Sy, I am glad that you enjoyed....~P

Margherita
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Eternity

16 posted 2005-02-19 05:10 PM

Wonderful moment of touching beauty!

Love, Margherita

*Alli4000*

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17 posted 2005-02-19 06:25 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

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