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Open Poetry #35

I watch you from afar

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-02-17 07:27 PM

I watch you from afar, From within the dark,
Your in every dream, You are everything,
I've held you within my heart-
Till the light takes you from my arms
I'm lost, i don't know where you are.

My tears show that i feel, Makes me know that i'm real,
Even when i feel that i can't go on,
I know you'd want me to stay and be strong-
Know that i love you.

Heaven's all i see, Within my dreams,
You are everything, My missing piece,
Hand in hand let us make a scene-
Only one chance lets not waste a thing.

Even when i feel that i can't go,
I know you'd want me to stay and be strong-
Know that i love you,
I've held you within my heart-
Till the light takes you from my arms
I'm lost, you know that i need you.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-02-17 07:38 PM

You've captured an essence in your words.

Dave

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2005-02-17 08:56 PM

Love flows deeper than the depths of the
great oceans...as does your own within
this. A good job of expressing it.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-02-18 07:15 AM

Would feel great to be needed so much, loved so much...tender love here!

you are so romantic!

~love and hugs
~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-02-18 07:31 AM

such a loving heart and soul~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-02-19 04:14 PM

Even when i feel that i can't go on,
I know you'd want me to stay and be strong-

How beautiful, dear Lee!

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-19 04:27 PM

very romantic

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-02-19 06:30 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-02-20 12:07 PM

such a heart beat!

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