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Red Dreams Member
since 2005-01-09
Posts 90massachusetts 
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sterile cold white afternoon the beast slinks about my legs breath to fog dissipating up and gone before thought shades of light depth perception amplification of absence of sound |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a sad feeling here, beautiful write |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the first realization of alone....scary but in time, with time, you will adjust....and it becomes not only a haven, but a gift much appreciated... Hugs and thank you for a lovely write |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
tore me open, bled me. wrong day to read this..or maybe it was perfect..i dunno..going to go pass out in some sort self induced haze now [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-18-2005 03:04 PM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
well done - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feelingt the cold ness and slap over here |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gives me the shivers.... well done. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sad~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the beast slinks about my legs" loved that line... well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW! ~~*~~ |
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