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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-17 07:34 AM



tiptoe with me there
behind our viridity of calm
under the limb walkers evening
let us listen to the warm

as the leaves of anil
susurrate lover's secrets
when our thighs bathe
in lazuline and saphire

and the cerulean sky
glows her proper blushing
behind moonflowers ascending
surreal sighed irradiation

tiptoe with me there
under a whisperers glove
into the palms of luxor
where eden is our lip song

and our eyes are gypsy mouths
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-17 07:55 AM


tiptoe with me there
under a whisperers glove
into the palms of luxor
where eden is our lip song

and our eyes are gypsy mouths


keep soothing away dear man....
the world needs it.     

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-17 08:26 AM


well, now you've gone and done it, I've got the Airlines on the line now...they've got me on hold, but as soon as I can, I'm catching the first flight west....hehehhehe

Hugs to ya and Good Morning...thank you for a smooth sail...

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-02-17 09:10 AM



This is a good series for you...
a gentle way to nudge the morning sun...

Red Dreams
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since 2005-01-09
Posts 90
massachusetts
4 posted 2005-02-17 09:29 AM


so many soft body parts
Does you poetry never suck?

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-02-17 10:33 AM


to sit in the whipsers of the eve and make our own whispers - yes -

so soft and sighfully loving -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
6 posted 2005-02-17 10:44 AM


as usual D...

you know how to write it and write it very well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-02-17 11:56 AM


love this series
suthern
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Louisiana
8 posted 2005-02-17 03:50 PM


as the leaves of anil
susurrate lover's secrets

Such a soft image... such powerful impact. *S* Beautiful work!


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2005-02-17 04:13 PM


and the cerulean sky
glows her proper blushing
behind moonflowers ascending
surreal sighed irradiation

the proper ladies
blush their delicate
upbringing,
who'd know beneath
the moonflowers,lay
the desires of a whore

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
10 posted 2005-02-22 11:09 AM


tiptoe with me there
under a whisperers glove
into the palms of luxor
where eden is our lip song

and our eyes are gypsy mouths


~~~~~


sigh.... yes you know....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

MGROVES
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california
11 posted 2005-02-25 01:09 AM


enjoyed the whispers~


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