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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-17 07:13 AM


A Dream

I walked upon a dreamer’s path
The burning coals of aftermath
Memories so full of filigree
Stored so deep the heart of me

The pale horse wings its way to home
The very fields where I once roam
And under trees the leaves have pile
And changed the very face of smile

Time has put a twist in store
That changed the thoughts of evermore
Turned the leaves into decay
Within the process of delay

And took the thoughts that once were you
And changed them into memories coup
Placing quicksand in the pile
That turns to acid in a while

So if you have a memory store
Water them forevermore



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-02-17 07:20 AM


I will, sy. Though there are a few that I will grasp and remove firmly by the roots.

But I have an entire section set aside for seymour seedlings.

and a

g'morning lovie!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-02-17 07:37 AM


serenity,
Were you looking for the earlybird this morning? Well you found him. And for that I will share my early worm. LOL   

ice
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3 posted 2005-02-17 08:02 AM


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This sounds a bit like a "dream within a dream"...

"...if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream."

(Edgar Allan Poe 1827)

A good poem, I am glad I openend it this morning...

___________ice
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LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-17 08:24 AM


I certainly will, would not ever want to loose them...thank you and wishing you a marvelous day
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-02-17 08:56 AM


'mornin' Mr. T.!

May you make new and wonderful memories for the dreams of your tomorrows!

Water them and plant them deep,
So they may grow whilst you sleep.

Loves 'n hugs,
EA



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6 posted 2005-02-17 09:04 AM


A lovely read this sunny crisp morn Sy.
I have a memory bank where all the good dreams go..
and the bad ones?
They get deleted. Poof!
~Morning hugs, and a spot of tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Nightshade
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7 posted 2005-02-17 09:46 AM


Seymour, as long as we have your wonderful words to read.... only good dreams will be allowed. hugs, Chris
NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2005-02-17 09:58 AM


My memories are stored in a place that only wih some proding of others, can be located.

But, I will try and keep them watered!

huggles. Morning tea?  Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Sunshine
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9 posted 2005-02-17 10:15 AM



No, we musn't leave things
to wither and die...we must
keep them watered, and dig
deep, deep wells...

Good morning Sy...




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10 posted 2005-02-17 10:48 AM


I think serenity has it right... take care of those good ones... oust the ones which bring blight to the soul. *S*

Beautiful write, my friend!!!

iliana
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11 posted 2005-02-17 11:57 AM


Thanks for the reminder, Sy.  Wishing you blissful dreams ahead.   .....jo
passing shadows
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12 posted 2005-02-17 12:01 PM


wonderful
SmartChick
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13 posted 2005-02-17 12:04 PM


Beautiful, Seymour! Soem memories are good to keep.
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14 posted 2005-02-17 01:21 PM


The time comes when we are nothing without our memories.  Great writing.  Joyce
Janet Marie
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15 posted 2005-02-17 04:30 PM


The pale horse wings its way to home
The very fields where I once roam
And under trees the leaves have pile
And changed the very face of smile

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Your poetic wile makes us all smile...
That verse made Randy smile too...
he says forget the horse...hes got his double saddle on. So, where ya wanna go?

*ww*




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