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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-02-17 01:57 AM



If it comes from the gut
internally
protected by abdominal walls
externally
sunflower seeds were extracted once
it was an abdominal discovery

If it comes from an intestinal tract
where bodily fluids are reabsorbed
and chime becomes sustenance
internally protected
externally draped
soothed by the latest laxative

If it comes from this tract
its 6 pack muscles rippled
belly pierced,
voyeuristic games are staged,
appearances become gutsy
that abdominal discovery
contracts
relaxes
in real time.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-17-2005 09:42 PM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-02-17 08:52 AM


This has got to be read by your PIP friends...fabulous descriptions...and whooosh...up to the top you go...

Thank you for writing and sharing

ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-02-17 09:44 PM


I must find a new way of getting my messages across..here's one, thanks Lee for clicking in


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