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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2005-02-17 01:09 AM


Called to arms the faithful mourn
the comfort zones of long ago
and move in somnambulistic state
within creation’s tumble wheel
elongated and not round.

Blows the wind of life my heart
beyond remembrances of past
and way beyond the split of me
into this feel good state of being.

Shimmers so the sphere of soul,
in effect the home of all it knows,
but too it breaks and shatters some
within the strife of mindless crime
marching always unaware
from growth spurt to growth spurt.

‘tis cowardice that so confines
the mindset of the merciless
in a bubble soon to fuel the fire
of its very own and permanent
bonfire of demise.

Called to arms is one and all
to fight the gift of human will
that easily, so easily,
flies way beyond the reach  
of love’s so tender touch.

Today my hands in upward plea,
my heart an open book,
yet still the tears of fear release
haunt the core of my belief …
because I’m still a baby, see,
in the throes of a growth spurt!    

Helen / 17 February 2005

© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2005-02-17 01:53 AM


Helen, this surely was an all-ecompassing poem....so many things said.  Brilliantly done, and I know how you feel.   ....jo
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-17 08:46 AM


I agree, jam packed with so much to ponder...this was embracing, and enjoyed the happy ending....you go girl!!!!
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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3 posted 2005-02-17 10:10 AM


Helen

"because I’m still a baby, see,
in the throes of a growth spurt!"

Me too!     

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-02-17 10:31 AM


I don't ever want to grow up
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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5 posted 2005-02-17 04:21 PM


Great write!

Eric

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