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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2005-02-16 10:24 PM


They surf the seas of rich green waving field grasses.
Hundreds of Canadian geese seeking safe sanctuary
land en masse as an approaching storm
thunders its warning,
it's time to sit tight, wait this one out.

Even the wary resident fox looks over her shoulder,
(as well she should) while leaping across the open field
in plain view, scarcely giving me (or nearby roosted chickens)
so much as a cursory sideways glance. The air feels heavy.

Fields of knee-high cover crops bend to the wind’s pressure,
waving the message to me
it’s only through such resilience they survive.
I nod in acknowledgement, moving forward with cautious resolve.
Mother nature’s lesson will not be lost in the approaching storm.


© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-16 11:17 PM


Kacy.........It sounds like a place I'd like to visit, or stay.  
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2 posted 2005-02-16 11:23 PM


Maybe its time to take some photos, and send them to you. It's a scene I've seen a few times while driving my daughter to the horse barn. I often stop a watch the birds and critters before heading back into town, which is fortunatley a mere five mile drive. You are welcome anytime.
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3 posted 2005-02-17 08:15 AM


"it’s only through such resilience they survive.
I nod in acknowledgement, moving forward with cautious resolve."

I further acknowledge with a nod...
often feeling like the geese and fox, happy that I am alive, but striding cautious...

enjoyed
____________ice/ford
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LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-17 08:22 AM


oh boy Kacy, lets go...I'm there in a heartbeat...you made this sound so desirable and real...hugs to you

Is this a place you've been?


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5 posted 2005-02-17 08:37 AM


Like the goose and fox
We also scurry for shelter
Any port in a storm
Is not lost on us.

Well written, Kacy.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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6 posted 2005-02-17 09:47 AM


when do we leave Kacy.  sounds like someplace I really need to be right now.  Hugs.
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7 posted 2005-02-17 10:09 AM


Smiling and inviting you to come and visit. This scene takes place on rural farmland here in Yamhill county. The rainbows are vivid 3D bands of beauty when casting their colors over the fields. The view in the distance of Mt Hood on a crystal clear day is magnificent.  I am never bored on that morning drive.
Thanks for visiting with me!

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8 posted 2005-02-17 12:20 PM


I love a good storm!
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9 posted 2005-02-17 04:20 PM


Great use of descriptive language and beautiful imagery.

Eric

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