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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-16 05:54 PM



WaveLengths

I didn't mind sitting in dark at times
using quiet to contemplate
what is in the future, tomorrow's fill
to push the need, a path to make.

Too long I sat and wondered what
if any could or would to me.
Too many ifs and whens would rise
and keep me still in dark to be.

No longer do I live romance,
a fantasy, an inward strive.
Even though the touch was warm,
it took away the need to drive.

Beginning now, I wait to hear.
Soon those motions will forward bend.
And I, I will be better for.
My life in dark will reach an end.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-02-16 08:17 PM


can feel this one -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

suthern
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2 posted 2005-02-17 10:15 AM


I like the strength of this... ready for better, not just content to wait. *S*
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-02-17 10:26 AM


Very nice M!

no longer living in dark is a very good thing..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-02-17 10:28 AM


ride the wavelengths...I've learned if you fight them, you just get tired


LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-02-17 10:54 AM


it already has my friend, it already has...beautifully written and felt!!!!

Hugs to ya gal...

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2005-02-17 12:11 PM


Beatuiful Maureen!
JL
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Texas, USA
7 posted 2005-02-17 05:49 PM


Too, too heart wrenching!
Geezzzz!

JL


Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2005-02-17 06:39 PM


"what is in the future, tomorrow's fill
to push the need, a path to make."  Many of us ask the same question of ourselves.

You're good as ever, M.

(Sorry I've been a stranger)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2005-02-17 08:39 PM



Yes, and the light will shine!
Hugging you...

K

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2005-02-17 09:54 PM


Thank you all..I have been pushing myself
(finally) and got fingerprinted and background checked and applied for substituting until I can get certified again to teach...spent today applying at all the schools I want to work at and then a meeting this evening and it feels soooo good...why I didn't do this a year or two ago I don't know Hopefully everything will stay positive for  awhile


M

Zinsser
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Calif.
11 posted 2005-03-08 03:13 PM


Bravo!!  Keep stepping into the unknown... forward motion...
I have been doing the same.... do't know where i'm going but it's Not where i have been....

: )

Sadelite
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12 posted 2005-03-08 03:49 PM


Enjoy your new endeavors.

I'm sure the children will greatly benefit by one so sensitive and understanding.

          sadie

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2005-03-08 05:04 PM


Thank you Connie and Sadie,  I am not so sure at the moment about anything...so much snow, schools closed many days, holidays and I am still waiting to hear...all in due time I guess.

In the meantime, I can write and organize my life to make it easier when the time comes that I am back to work for good.
So if I seem to be around alot, it's because I am waiting and there is comfort in these pages. (and I have to stick around for the call/s)


M

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