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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-02-16 11:23 AM


you breathe . . . words . . .
of warm ocean breezes
and
sea shell melodies

playing to my heart
your soft love songs

summer sun kissed
in mocha brown . . . and . . .
tan sand sounds

wrapping me in
a
silken slip sarong

across my bare . . . exposure

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Snow
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1 posted 2005-02-16 11:53 AM


a song i wish i knew/felt.....
thank you for sharing this, susan.

hugs..
s

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

choshi
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2 posted 2005-02-16 11:54 AM


Lovely images and feelings.....surreal yet felt  ~P
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-16 01:10 PM


lovely
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-16 03:27 PM


and you are the music
that stirs
such a melody
or is it malady? (grin)
enjoyed you babe

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2005-02-16 03:42 PM


Lovely reading.  Joyce
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6 posted 2005-02-16 03:42 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!

this is such a keeper....

JL
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7 posted 2005-02-16 04:04 PM


WOW!

Susan
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8 posted 2005-02-16 08:09 PM


Your kind replies are music to my ears - thanks to each and every one of you - you warm my heart -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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9 posted 2005-02-16 09:02 PM


Love this Susan. Sigh! Now where is my song? Oh yeah I am listening to Motorhead at the moment...song called, "One More F------ Time" LOL! Sniff! It is the only music I have today! sigh
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2005-02-16 10:14 PM


sensous
as a silk sand wrapp

suthern
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11 posted 2005-02-17 10:15 AM


Such sensual beauty. *S*
Susan
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12 posted 2005-02-17 10:32 AM


Kevin - you make me laugh - thank you - needed that - hugs-

Inky - thanks for the smooth sensuous girlfriend

Suthern - what a lovely reply - thank you

Hugs all - s

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Ericc
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13 posted 2005-02-17 04:22 PM


Wow...!!!!!

Eric

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2005-02-17 05:53 PM


you have painted a write here... and nicely too

regards
sudhir

Magnus
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15 posted 2005-02-17 06:09 PM


This makes me want Summer to hurry in....and
never leave!!!  Well done, Susan.

DavePage
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16 posted 2005-02-17 07:33 PM


Susan

I do like your words.

Dave

Susan
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17 posted 2005-02-17 09:54 PM


Thank you dear poets and my dear friends - your kind replies warm my heart -

hugs -   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

iliana
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18 posted 2005-02-17 11:13 PM


OMG, Susan!  This was great!   ....jo
Susan
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19 posted 2005-02-18 10:56 AM


Thanks Jo!  Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

miscellanea
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20 posted 2005-04-22 11:32 PM


Susan,

  I love the natural pause in this.  It breathes with the reader, as one!  Will love this in the library!

       miscellanea

Susan
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21 posted 2005-04-22 11:34 PM


thanks misc' - you smile me - hugs my friend -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

TexUS
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22 posted 2005-04-23 12:42 PM


Soft, splendid, and truly enjoyed!
Goldenrose
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23 posted 2005-04-23 05:22 AM


Susan as usual you have the ability to move us like waves on a shifting sand shore..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

Susan
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24 posted 2005-04-23 01:27 PM


thanks Tex

Goldenrose - most kind my friend - you smile me

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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25 posted 2005-04-25 11:27 PM


ah the sound of an ocean's body
very nice
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Susan
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26 posted 2005-04-26 12:53 PM


thank you bernie

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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27 posted 2005-05-01 01:23 AM


I needed a smile...and this is the poem that gives it to me. I know I commented on it before...but it needs to be brought back. Still loving this piece very much Susan.
Rick
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28 posted 2005-05-01 07:57 AM


Susan, this was beautiful and very much enjoyed my friend, you have a great way with words, singing them as a siren song.

Sincerely
Rick

Susan
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29 posted 2005-05-02 10:50 AM


Kevin - if I can gift you a smile with my words, then truly I am blessed -

Rick - thank you so, my friend - your kindness warms my heart -

Love to you both - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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