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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-16 07:06 AM



my hands are the man
of wind touch sighs
and you are tomorrow
as a carmine rouge
with rose petal whispers

by window's wall reflecting
diaphanous fragility
perhaps in mirrors
of warm water dancing
for eyelids fills of river sighs

and gentle the fit of ends
into the soft safe surround
cupping nurtured blends
comfort and desire entwined
warmed by the kissing mouth

with the sides of a smile's cerise
_______________

dark  (series: sooth)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-02-16 07:22 AM


and you do so sooth very elegantly this morning sir...a welcomed read, beyond any explaination of words...were you reading my mind...again?  

Smiles and hugs

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-02-16 07:38 AM


ms lee j..perhaps just listening..thanks lady friend
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-02-16 08:19 AM


you are the velvet soothe
after the poor rose has been plucked raw

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2005-02-16 08:30 AM


my hands are the man
of wind touch sighs
and you are tomorrow
as a carmine rouge
with rose petal whispers

by window's wall reflecting
diaphanous fragility
perhaps in mirrors
of warm water dancing
for eyelids fills of river sighs

==================================

those verses are poetic gold poet sir....
such superb imagery and personify...love the vocab and allit word play, and what an opening hook.... smooth and soothe..poet groove.

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-02-16 08:33 AM


ms inky..
let me lotion
your notions
with gentle
thanks lady friend


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ms janet,
you mothy me softly
and I blush at the wings
of your butterfly
thank you

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-02-16 10:21 AM


D - such soft beauty and warm wrap of soul this morning - may I cuddle in to your words?

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-02-16 10:25 AM


soothsin..they are my arms
wear them gentle
enjoy the warm
claim them
as your whisper place
thanks hon


Sunshine
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8 posted 2005-02-16 11:32 AM


by window's wall reflecting
diaphanous fragility
perhaps in mirrors
of warm water dancing
for eyelids fills of river sighs

~*~

smoothly soothing, indeed...
a calming, sensuous poem, this...


Indigo
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9 posted 2005-02-16 03:26 PM


A series of soothe
it's what you do best, D.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2005-02-16 03:39 PM


ms sunshine
thank you for the visit
hope you feel the feathers here
_____________

ms indi, you do well at
making the sooth ooze lady
thank you for your velvet

Joyce Johnson
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11 posted 2005-02-16 03:45 PM


You wrap phrases around words with skill.  Joyce
MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-02-17 12:54 PM


soothing whispers~
touch one's soul~

`


babygirlwlove
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13 posted 2005-02-17 07:26 AM


soothe, indeed....

tender spill....so much enjoyed this~

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-02-17 07:47 AM


no one, and I mean no one does smooth sooth quit the way you do babe.  Sleepy morning hugs to you.
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