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Open Poetry #35

The Rising Crest

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-02-15 07:14 PM

I rose to crest of lofted wave
the master bearing on his slave.
As foam did touch my fingertips
and the thought of you...
Left there, that one kiss.

Lingering so, each breath then shared
as passion flowed and touches dared.
Feeling each curve, a lofted peak...
A journey entwined, of lover’s sleek.

Left to dry upon sandy shores
as minds dreamt of sultry explores.
Seeing each step that ventured away,
to come soon again....another day.

Rhythmic the rise and fall of each
as travels sought the watery breech...
Filling each hand with shells a few.
As fires rekindled burned anew.

And as the set of stars then hailed
the rapture of two breaths exhaled,
a sigh brought out the wandering moon
before the fiddle, the cow or spoon.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-02-15 07:50 PM

This is still very understated

But it is all in the mind

Or maybe

The mind is all in it

Dave

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2005-02-16 12:32 PM

You weave the best moments of life with fantasy and fairy tales... and do so in such a way I'm smiling before the little dog laughs. *S*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-16 01:09 PM

awesome ending!

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