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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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What becomes of us now that we have lost our sight how did light switch with night leaving the moths the spotless monarch swarms, less color & clarity formless, bodies fall, edges ebbed as in sanity. God is in the shadows, the devil’s in delight. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What becomes of us now that we have lost our sight how did light switch with night leaving the moths the spotless monarch swarms, less color & clarity ----------------------------- Ive no wisdom to answer your poetic ponderings...but this moth thanks you for the verse and the not so blind insight.  Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good pondering here |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Sometimes we just have to share a candle to enlighten the pondering even more...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was sad, but so remarkably beautiful...does that make sense? Hugs to you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely written, though sad....but such wisdom within. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Janet Marie! Thanks passing shadows! Karilea -- what beautiful light, thanks for the picture, dear lady! Lee -- Thanks! Magnus -- Yes, Magnus, sad is right. Corinne |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
God is in the shadows, the devil’s in delight. how true, excellent cor |
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