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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-02-15 04:14 PM



On your fingertips the
world passes.

If I am touch...yet
only once.

This turn would be enough.

© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2005-02-15 04:17 PM


A lot said in so few words.
Good one Ericc.

JL


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2 posted 2005-02-15 04:41 PM


Lovely Eric...well done!
Hugs~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-02-15 09:13 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read,

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4 posted 2005-02-15 11:01 PM


You have a true gift for quiet, short, intensely loving verse....like this.

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5 posted 2005-02-16 02:47 AM


enough indeed
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6 posted 2005-02-16 03:26 AM


Very good, Eric.
Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2005-02-16 07:31 AM


Eric, this was indeed truth, and so beautifully expressed...thank you for sharing
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8 posted 2005-02-16 12:39 PM


Yes... just that. *S*

The beauty of this is a gift to my day. *S*

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9 posted 2005-02-19 03:59 PM


Enough

to know Love...
Beautiful, dear Eric!
I love you.
Margherita

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10 posted 2005-02-19 04:04 PM


"On your fingertips the
world passes.

If I am touch...yet
only once.

This turn would be enough."

Eric,

His world floats
across my fingertips
each page turned,
tenderness learned,
the words
touch my lips.

Very inspiration....your words.   ....jo

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11 posted 2005-02-19 06:33 PM


Enjoyed this!!!

~Alli~

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