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Your Silence Had An Impact
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Your Silence Had An Impact |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Your Silence Had An Impact The reason I was not writing It was not writer's block Its because of your silence I've been in emotional shock You gave me reason to write When you kept in touch Can you recall those times When words meant so much To continue without a reason What's the use anymore You appear to be oblivious That I am shocked to the core Yearning now my only reason I was still longing its true Your silence had an impact Because I feel lost without you Hope©2005 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely thoughts written down for special refrence, very pretty read...thoughtful...you should give this to him...hugs...Lee J. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, this one really touched my heart.... such longing is felt in it. Hugs, sweet lady, Ethel  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
knowing this one to well Hope. HUGS |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I have re-read this posting to Hope. It is about Hope but it is straight from the heart of working away. Dave You love them or you dont. I said to my other half today "this is like talking to the Captain on the Titanic who has decided to go down with the ship, even though a lifeboat is there", and that wasn't separation; that was trying to get agreement to spend the money to fix my car brakes and discs. You have a phone 'decide'! I ended up with mammoth phone bills from Manila; I was dragged back from the South of France; hammered on other sites, and whilst I was stuck in hotels on my own for 10 years out of 15, 3 times writhing around on a hotel floor with food poisoning, I was forced back home on whatever reason. My other half can walk out tomorrow, take half and having prevented me from building up things that would have been stable and brilliant, walk away. Yes I sound pee'd off, but I am now stuck in the South West of England; I've watched everything I worked for on a career go the pictures as people think I have retired, and all the breakthroughs I made in career, halted because I loved someone, so I will now be reduced to stacking shelves in a supermarket because someone didn't want to be alone and wouldn't move and considered my sacrifice never to be anything. Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful. JL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope, you expression through this lovely poem is completely felt. It flows so gracefully and yet so sadly.  ....jo |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This I know so well....and I'm relearning it now, in fact. The smaller the response, the less you want to write...and the less you do write. Then there comes a time when one person you counted on to hear you, doesn't respond....and it's more than your spirit can take. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dontcha know I understand |
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