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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-15 07:43 AM


Illusions Bath

When I walk a rainbows path
Illusion is my choice of bath
I towel myself with tender cloth
And sip the grander of the broth

I wash my feet desires reign
Without a thought or complain
And kiss me twice the blarney stone
That sooths the fractures of my bone

I lay the clean that shows so green
And marvel at the lovely scene
The yellow light that shines so bright
Is to me a sheer delight

And when I pass the color red
And see my love within my bed
These rainbows are my menu’s dream
Where brews my coup and sense of theme

I’d offer you this path to stroll
But you may think this path too droll

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-02-15 07:46 AM


I’d offer you this path to stroll
But you may think this path too droll
~never~

M

juliet_2u
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2 posted 2005-02-15 08:48 AM


I knew that coming back for a visit here was the perfect thing for me to do today. Your words are still are beautiful as ever. What sweet things I have found so early in the mornin.
Hugs,
Jules

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3 posted 2005-02-15 09:10 AM


Ah dear Sy, any path you walk
would never be droll !!
Thank you for this excellent morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-02-15 10:37 AM


Me thinkest not thy path be droll,
For it be one of rainbow stroll.

Hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day ~ and night! ~ with your Lady of Camelot!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA
Have a glorious day, Sir Sigh!

garysgirl
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5 posted 2005-02-15 11:03 AM


Good Morning, Seymour. And thanks
for a beautiful poem.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-02-15 11:08 AM


indeed lovely
vandana
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7 posted 2005-02-15 11:16 AM


good read
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2005-02-15 12:16 PM


And kiss me twice the blarney stone
That sooths the fractures of my bone


  

*ww*

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-02-15 12:31 PM


no, no, no, it's a tremendous path, worthy of the song you've written...lovely Sy


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-02-15 02:07 PM


Maureen,
Thank you dear.

Thank you Jules

Nancy,
Hugs and tea, love it.

Earth Angel
The night was a little more interesting then the day. LOL

Ethel,
Thank you dear.

passing,


vandana,
THank you dear.

JM,
Are you taking your chicken soup?
Winkiewinkie

LeeJ,
Good morning sweet.

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