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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-15 07:10 AM



Mayored Valentine 2005

The day comes and goes with little effort
and the pressing of worries
awakens the morning pain
that either comes with age or that
of disappointment, that life
has very little to offer, although
the gift of smiles was sent my way
while waiting for the closing hours.

There on that bench, an elderly gentleman,
from the inner city who comes out to relax
and be fearless of the passersby remembered me
(as always) and although rarely do I visit,
he is the Mayor of the Bench and knows many,
includes many, even if only to say hello.

For three hours he kept me laughing,
as we swapped stories of our lives
(some I have heard before) but always
with a touch new added.
Others stopped by just to see
what was making him so lively
(me of course)
and some a bit jealous of the attention
joined in, asking more of myself
than I usually share.

They added to my day, making it less
of a Valentine neglect and more
of a day of sharing,
exactly what I hoped for, if all else failed.
So to my benchtime valentines,
I promise to never let you down,
as long as we all remain in good health...

And to the sender of those beautiful red roses...
the deliverer said: "What a beautiful smile"
and that says it all~~


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2005 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2005-02-15 07:46 AM


smiling for you sweetie. So glad you got to share so much of your beautiful self with the world.  Hugs.
GG
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2005-02-15 07:56 AM


Well I spent mine in bed doing homework...
so a park bench sounds awfully appealing lol

I'm glad it wasn't as bad as what it could have been,
you had someone to sit with, made people jealous, got flowers, and smiled big. Definitely a good thing.
Love the poem...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-15 11:19 AM


precious you
miscellanea
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OH
4 posted 2005-02-15 12:22 PM


very sweet;  I'm glad you enjoyed the day--  I'm enjoying just reading about it!  It is refreshing.

             miscellanea

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2005-02-15 12:36 PM


and that makes it all worthwhile, doesn't it...absolutely lovely, as the poetess herself.  
Ericc
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6 posted 2005-02-15 04:07 PM


Great write!

Eric

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
7 posted 2005-02-15 04:11 PM


Oh, to be a Mayored Valentine
would be so devine.
And I bet you made his day, one of his best too!

JL

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2005-02-15 04:14 PM


I am glad your valentines day wasn't a total waste. Sounds like you had a real good time. Me! I just sat here in my house, all alone.
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